September 17, 2003

Parking Lot

outside the car, night
intense glow, nearby wind
two of you in shadow.

Posted by Kammer at September 17, 2003 12:04 PM
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ok here's my question...
do you mean two of you as in you and a friend or do you mean two of you as in first-person and the speaker sees two of himself? or is there another possibility?

Posted by: joy at September 19, 2003 01:19 AM

The speaker saw two of himself.

Posted by: Kammer at September 19, 2003 08:45 AM

danke. got it.

Posted by: joy at October 1, 2003 01:00 PM
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